Someone wrote in [personal profile] criticalkink 2016-11-26 11:20 am (UTC)

Re: See Me At My Worst, 5/? (Percy/Vox Machina, NC-17)

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He's sure he would have heard about it, though; someone raving about being visited by an incubus-succubus pair would surely have drawn attention.
Lol, probably! Percy might die from this, but what a way to go out.

“I don’t think that was what you were going to say,” Vex says, dragging the circle of her fist slowly up his shaft. “I think you were just going to ask to get fucked.” The word sounds so wicked coming from her lips. Percy pushes up into her fist and she tightens it almost excruciatingly. “Is that what you think is going to happen? You’re going to get a good fuck and that’s it?”
Gods, Percy loves her in that moment.

ME TOO PERCY ME TOO. Filthily smug Vex is delightful.

“A very special ring,” Vex says. “I had Gilmore make it.”
Gods bless you, mysterious writer, for adding in a magical cock ring.

“You’re fucking beautiful,” Vax says, and Percy doesn’t know if he means Keyleth or Percy, given the way he turns his hand, pushing a third finger into Percy.
Both?

“Oh, Keyleth, just sit on his face.” Vex sounds closer
*swoons*

Percy only got the slightest glimpse of it before the blindfold went on and he was lifted onto it by Grog, bound to it by Pike and her expert knotwork.
Yes yes yes Pike and her sailors knots YES!

“Gods, do it,” someone says thickly, and Percy inhales sharply when he realizes it’s Vax, that Vax is the one begging Keyleth to use Percy’s mouth.
I’m gonna FAINT. This fic is TOO GOOD!

“Bossy,” Vax says, sheathing himself inside Percy to the hilt with one long thrust and crying out with it. Percy can picture him there: head thrown back, the long line of his throat taut with the sound. “Fuck, de Rolo—”
Oh ye gods this is so hot.

It’s complicated, intricate, intimate, and exactly what he’s craved for so long.
Just reestablishing that Percy has wanted this for so long is just … yesssssss. So hot.

“You’re all so beautiful,” Pike says, and Percy feels her little hand beside Keyleth’s on his chest. Her fingers trail down to touch the ring around the base of his cock, and he bucks at the feeling, throwing Vax off his pace. Vax swears and slaps Percy’s thigh, and Pike pulls her hand away with a soft apology. It sounds like she’s laughing, though.
Yes good yes good yes perfect.

he feels the entire room freeze as they wait to see if he’s tapping out.
Thank you for including this moment.

“Vex, wh—oh, oh gods!” Vex has snuck her hand in between Percy’s face and Keyleth’s body and pushed two fingers neatly inside Keyleth. Keyleth squeals and grinds down against Percy’s mouth.
“I don’t think that was part of the plan, sister,” Vax says.
“But it’s working so well, brother.”

This is so hot and so in character.

“What’s the matter, Vax’ildan?” He makes his voice as light as he can under the circumstances. “Don’t you get her off as hard as I do?”
HOLY GODS
HOLY TOAST
HOLY CHEESE ON TOAST
*faints*

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