Someone wrote in [personal profile] criticalkink 2016-11-23 08:35 am (UTC)

Re: See Me At My Worst, 2/? (Percy/Vox Machina, NC-17)

(OP here)

I'm so excited I'm so excited omg omg omg.

This is a really great start. I love the rules you outlined first, very important. And I love that they got worked out ahead of time.

I love that Vax is the one talking so much at the start.

“I’m not, really.”
A sharp slap to his thigh draws a surprised yelp from his throat. “You are what we say you are,” Vex says.
“Beautiful,” Vax says.
“Lovely,” Keyleth says.
“You’re okay, I guess,” Scanlan says, and Percy feels the brush of Scanlan’s lips on his temple.

This ENTIRE bit is the best! I'm so happy. I'm so excited. This is everything I wanted and more.

THANK YOU. : DDD

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